the heavy worm
twisting between my fingers
sunlight on the hook


9 Responses

  1. Helen Buckingham Says:

    incredibly vivid

  2. @undefined Says:

    I like the surprise in this one. Nice work. k.

  3. Lisa Brown Says:

    YES-vivid! I can feel the worm's movements between my own fingers and see the shine of it's slick body, the shine of the sharp hook…

  4. Marie Shimane Says:

    these ocean mornings
    cold — the sand between my toes
    keeping a warm past

  5. Frances Ruth Harris Says:


  6. patriciaipsa Says:

    the sunlight draws attention to what is at stake here. great!

  7. Alan Summers Says:

    Wonderful work!


  8. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Funny, but I can almost feel the weight of that worm between my fingers! A good one.

  9. johnhawkhead Says:

    Thanks to you all for such inspiring comments

Leave a Reply