the heavy worm twisting between my fingers sunlight on the hook
—John Hawkhead
Issue 12.1 | 18 October 2012
incredibly vivid
I like the surprise in this one. Nice work. k.
YES-vivid! I can feel the worm's movements between my own fingers and see the shine of it's slick body, the shine of the sharp hook…
these ocean mornings cold — the sand between my toes keeping a warm past
Ouch!
the sunlight draws attention to what is at stake here. great!
Wonderful work!
Alan
Funny, but I can almost feel the weight of that worm between my fingers! A good one.
Thanks to you all for such inspiring comments
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October 18th, 2012 at 1:02 pm
incredibly vivid
October 18th, 2012 at 1:18 pm
I like the surprise in this one. Nice work. k.
October 18th, 2012 at 1:23 pm
YES-vivid! I can feel the worm's movements between my own fingers and see the shine of it's slick body, the shine of the sharp hook…
October 18th, 2012 at 1:26 pm
these ocean mornings
cold — the sand between my toes
keeping a warm past
October 18th, 2012 at 2:50 pm
Ouch!
October 18th, 2012 at 6:08 pm
the sunlight draws attention to what is at stake here. great!
October 19th, 2012 at 4:37 pm
Wonderful work!
Alan
November 23rd, 2012 at 2:59 am
Funny, but I can almost feel the weight of that worm between my fingers! A good one.
March 21st, 2017 at 5:33 am
Thanks to you all for such inspiring comments