owls hooting
somewhere in the darkness
I enter
the last digit
of her number


8 Responses

  1. harrisfr Says:

    Senses are acute! Anticipation is directed!

  2. Vida Says:

    Beautiful poem, John.


  3. Alan Summers Says:

    Very atmospheric!


  4. Helen Buckingham Says:

    I love this tanka John – the pacing of it is excellent – subtly humorous and very empathetic.

  5. Hannah Mahoney Says:

    Evocative and suspenseful! Great jux. Nice work, John.

  6. Scott Terrill Says:

    bravo John

  7. Rebecca Drouilhet Says:

    Fine poem, John.

  8. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Like it, John!


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