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1. Sylvia Forges-Ryan Says:
   February 14th, 2013 at 8:47 am

   Love this! It could even make the lovelorn smile.

2. Frances Ruth Harris Says:
   February 14th, 2013 at 8:51 am

   Thanks for the memories!

3. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:
   February 14th, 2013 at 8:58 am

   Sweet! :)

   marion

4. Alan Summers Says:
   February 14th, 2013 at 9:00 am

   What to say but vincent tripi has replaced Eric Clapton as God.

   Wonderful to see this most exquisite of haiku writers at tinywords.

5. Frances Ruth Harris Says:
   February 14th, 2013 at 9:02 am

   Thank Heavens there is more than one God! :-)

6. Peggy Tilsen Says:
   February 14th, 2013 at 11:28 am

   Super. I bet it touched a personal note in every heart that was open.

7. eikenlaan Says:
   February 14th, 2013 at 11:42 am

   Valentine day
   the traffic lights
   stuck on red

   Maire

8. David H. Rosen Says:
   February 17th, 2013 at 2:59 am

   Bravo!

   After all the darkness
   light
   and more light

9. Jem Says:
   February 21st, 2013 at 4:35 am

   Good one – an entire story in three lines.

10. iPhone App Developer Says:
    February 25th, 2013 at 3:38 am

    I missed my valentine day.. On that day nobody I have :)

11. S.M. Abeles Says:
    February 25th, 2013 at 11:09 am

    Oh, excellent!

12. Tim Says:
    March 28th, 2013 at 7:30 am

    Fine poem and great structure. New to this. Not sure of etiquette of theft or dialogue:

    big town
    many redlights
    memorial day

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