Scott, I am always left enriched by your poetry. Such a perfectly crafted verse. I agree with the other readers about the truly wonderful ambiguity. Again you raise existential themes, but leave them to the reader to interpret. For me, this is such a hope-filled poem.
April 16th, 2013 at 10:37 am
Love this one and the way the image opens up dramatically! Such a reflection of the way things really are.
April 16th, 2013 at 11:52 am
Simple but effective – nicely put.
April 16th, 2013 at 1:32 pm
And such a reflection for those who see possibilities!
April 16th, 2013 at 4:30 pm
I like the way this can be either a positive or negative reflection on the situation.
marion
April 16th, 2013 at 6:37 pm
Scott, I am always left enriched by your poetry. Such a perfectly crafted verse. I agree with the other readers about the truly wonderful ambiguity. Again you raise existential themes, but leave them to the reader to interpret. For me, this is such a hope-filled poem.
Thank you.
Strider
April 16th, 2013 at 8:23 pm
Oh, thank you all very much, and to tinywords, one of life's small beauties, as well.
April 17th, 2013 at 3:56 pm
Thought provoking & great!
April 22nd, 2013 at 5:58 am
And thank you, Kath and Robert.