ghetto building
in every window
the rest of the world

8 Responses

  1. Kathabela Wilson Says:

    Love this one and the way the image opens up dramatically! Such a reflection of the way things really are.

  2. Robert Says:

    Simple but effective – nicely put.

  3. harrisfr Says:

    And such a reflection for those who see possibilities!

  4. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    I like the way this can be either a positive or negative reflection on the situation.


  5. haikuapprentice Says:

    Scott, I am always left enriched by your poetry. Such a perfectly crafted verse. I agree with the other readers about the truly wonderful ambiguity. Again you raise existential themes, but leave them to the reader to interpret. For me, this is such a hope-filled poem.

    Thank you.


  6. @DreamsOfTaos Says:

    Oh, thank you all very much, and to tinywords, one of life's small beauties, as well.

  7. Dawn Apanius Says:

    Thought provoking & great!

  8. @DreamsOfTaos Says:

    And thank you, Kath and Robert.

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