foot massage
the creek gurgles
between my toes

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Sean Carlton

Sean Carlton lives in West Hollywood, California. He is active with the Southern California Haiku Study Group and is assisting with outreach and the twitter feed for the upcoming Haiku North America Conference (August 2013) in Long Beach, California.

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  1. I love the opening. Perhaps it is my mirror neurons but the phrase "foot massage" triggered a delightfully sensual anticipatory tingle up my spine. Very nice onomatopoeia creates a vivid sensory image to concretize the setting. You've conjured a natural spa.

    As is well known self massage is never as relieving as one given by someone else, so I think I will save this poem up for next time my feet are weary and sore, and enjoy the effect it has on me.

    Thanks Sean for the massage!

    Strider

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