fresh paint
on the water tower
tourist season

7 Responses

  1. Jan Dobb Says:

    pioneer hut
    the tourist season
    just beginning

    Jan Dobb
    (Asahi Haikuist Network, May 3, 2012)

  2. Marie Shimane Says:

    the tourist season
    yet not one 'wish you were here'
    in my mailbox

  3. Peter Newtion Says:

    fresh paint
    on the old screen door
    the familiar slam

  4. haikuapprentice Says:

    So evocative, Brandon. Somehow sabi too. I am taken back to my childhood. ..

    tourist season
    parents are itching
    to get out of town


  5. Alan Summers Says:

    old concrete post
    threaded with lichen
    its new barbed wire

    Alan Summers
    Haiku Spirit #16, Eire (1999)

  6. Ellen Grace Olinger Says:

    learning the roads
    letters on the tower
    spell home

  7. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    A simple, effective haiku.


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