fresh paint on the water tower tourist season
—Brandon Bordelon
Issue 13.2 | 26 July 2013
pioneer hut the tourist season just beginning
Jan Dobb (Asahi Haikuist Network, May 3, 2012)
the tourist season yet not one 'wish you were here' in my mailbox
fresh paint on the old screen door the familiar slam
So evocative, Brandon. Somehow sabi too. I am taken back to my childhood. ..
tourist season parents are itching to get out of town
Strider
old concrete post threaded with lichen its new barbed wire
Alan Summers Haiku Spirit #16, Eire (1999)
learning the roads letters on the tower spell home
A simple, effective haiku.
marion
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July 26th, 2013 at 4:21 pm
pioneer hut
the tourist season
just beginning
Jan Dobb
(Asahi Haikuist Network, May 3, 2012)
July 26th, 2013 at 7:25 pm
the tourist season
yet not one 'wish you were here'
in my mailbox
July 27th, 2013 at 5:17 am
fresh paint
on the old screen door
the familiar slam
July 27th, 2013 at 5:23 am
So evocative, Brandon. Somehow sabi too. I am taken back to my childhood. ..
tourist season
parents are itching
to get out of town
Strider
July 27th, 2013 at 3:43 pm
old concrete post
threaded with lichen
its new barbed wire
Alan Summers
Haiku Spirit #16, Eire (1999)
August 3rd, 2013 at 6:16 am
learning the roads
letters on the tower
spell home
August 5th, 2013 at 10:15 am
A simple, effective haiku.
marion