fresh paint on the water tower tourist season Published by Brandon Bordelon Brandon Bordelon is from Baton Rouge, LA. His haiku have appeared in various print and online publications. View all posts by Brandon Bordelon
So evocative, Brandon. Somehow sabi too. I am taken back to my childhood. .. tourist season parents are itching to get out of town Strider Reply
old concrete post threaded with lichen its new barbed wire Alan Summers Haiku Spirit #16, Eire (1999) Reply
pioneer hut
the tourist season
just beginning
Jan Dobb
(Asahi Haikuist Network, May 3, 2012)
the tourist season
yet not one 'wish you were here'
in my mailbox
fresh paint
on the old screen door
the familiar slam
So evocative, Brandon. Somehow sabi too. I am taken back to my childhood. ..
tourist season
parents are itching
to get out of town
Strider
old concrete post
threaded with lichen
its new barbed wire
Alan Summers
Haiku Spirit #16, Eire (1999)
learning the roads
letters on the tower
spell home
A simple, effective haiku.
marion