roses lost in weeds–
her teacup filling again
with cold rain
Issue 13.2 | 14 August 2013
Vivid, poignant poem of loss. A scene of both stasis and change. The survivor or caretaker is not ready to move on, but nature inevitably does. Beautifully penned.
A simply wonderful poem. I am always equally touched by the life stories/careers/backgrounds of contributors, which are interesting works of art unto themselves.
thorns are restored
to the roses
Haunting, very beautiful haiku. Feeling that cold rain and loss.
A well-depicted sense of sadness, loss and even a touch of madness here (the teacup made me think of the Mad Hatter's tea party) I really like this gothic haiku.
Love this so much. Such romantic images and feelings.
Excellent! Just the right amount of poignancy.
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