first spring ramble
a wedge of geese pries
the sky open

6 Responses

  1. harrisfr Says:

    Nice. Thank you.

  2. Theresa C. Says:

    Lovely imagery; perfect for the season. Thank you!

  3. Dave Read Says:

    Really like "a wedge of geese". Great image.

  4. Ellen Grace Olinger Says:

    A lovely haiku. I always look forward to the marsh marigolds.

  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    I'm also a fan of that great description 'a wedge of geese' :)


  6. haikuapprentice Says:

    Magnificent imagery, Ernest

    Archimedes was said to have discovered the principle of the lever, and to have commented, "Give me a lever long enough, and a fulcrum (or wedge) on which to place it, and I shall move the world"

    Your "wedge of geese" doing just that! Prying open the sky, turning the world itself to start a new season.

    Brilliant poem.


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