Bill Waters looks at the world through haiku-colored glasses and likes what he sees. He lives in Pennington, New Jersey, U.S.A., with his wonderful wife and their two amazing cats.
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Dear Bill, Wonderful to read your haiku today! Ellen
The fact that it is the shadow rather than the cloud that is being described makes this striking. Although the shadow of that exact cloud will never reappear, the cloud itself might! :)
Dear Bill, Wonderful to read your haiku today! Ellen
This is lovely.
Thank you, Ellen and Jean! :- )
Bill I really appreciate the sabi quality of this poem.
Ah, life is so fleeting! And yet…
In a haiku as fine as this one, we can preserve a "shadow" of it!
Strider
Thanks, haikuapprentice! _/|_
The fact that it is the shadow rather than the cloud that is being described makes this striking. Although the shadow of that exact cloud will never reappear, the cloud itself might! :)
marion
Thank you, Marion! :- )