an evening of tangled thoughts . . . through branches even this rugged moon looks tattered at the edges
(originally appeared in American Tanka ? June 2012)
—Kala Ramesh
Issue 14.1 | 20 May 2014
The 'tangled thoughts' made me think of me think of intrigue and perhaps deceit and the tattered moon a relationship that is in pieces. Very nice, Kala.
marion
Thanks a ton, Marion :)
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May 20th, 2014 at 10:26 am
The 'tangled thoughts' made me think of me think of intrigue and perhaps deceit and the tattered moon a relationship that is in pieces. Very nice, Kala.
marion
May 22nd, 2014 at 10:54 am
Thanks a ton, Marion :)