Issue 14.1 | 8 July 2014
Gosh, some months everything can go wrong, go to seed, and some months feel magical regardless of troubles and issues.
I drift along with the breeze
and dandelion seeds
Publications credits: Aesthetics, (Bath Spa University 2007); Haiku Friends 2 ed. Masaharu Hirata (Japan 2007); see haiku here, Haiga artwork by Kuniharu Shimizu (Japan 2010)
Sue, I love this one. I'm just back from vacation, back to work and for me summer seems over. Yet in your poem, you show that the end of one thing contains the beginning of the next, with more flowers, sun, life to come.
From the sadness of summer's end to hope for new beginnings. Lovely.
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