August ends
to seed

3 Responses

  1. Alan Summers Says:


    August ends
    everything gone
    to seed


    Gosh, some months everything can go wrong, go to seed, and some months feel magical regardless of troubles and issues.

    lazy afternoon-
    I drift along with the breeze
    and dandelion seeds

    Alan Summers
    Publications credits: Aesthetics, (Bath Spa University 2007); Haiku Friends 2 ed. Masaharu Hirata (Japan 2007); see haiku here, Haiga artwork by Kuniharu Shimizu (Japan 2010)


  2. Jeanne B Says:

    Sue, I love this one. I'm just back from vacation, back to work and for me summer seems over. Yet in your poem, you show that the end of one thing contains the beginning of the next, with more flowers, sun, life to come.

  3. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    From the sadness of summer's end to hope for new beginnings. Lovely.


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