the past tense he uses
to describe me
Issue 14.2 | 25 September 2014
Margaret. Very nice, very strong, very smart. Thank you.— Jim Delay
so many storms
is our last one
Oooh – nasty, nasty! I like this one a lot :)
Very inspirational, thanks :)
So for once he gets his grammar correct, with the worse result.
Powerful haiku, Margaret. I am particularly struck by the poignancy in your choice of "uses" – a continuing present tense form – deliberately declining yourself to employ the past tense.
Very moving work, and very raw.
Thank you for sharing it.
From "thunderclap" to the last word, yes, ouch!
Skillfully written: "the past tense he uses"
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