more bad news forces its way inside our home … a thin rim of snow around the welcome mat
—Janet Lynn Davis
Issue 14.2 | 26 November 2014
What a wonderful jux. Subtle, poignant, relatable & powerful.
A very tight tanka, just goes to show how contemporary the form can be.
Excellent work!
warm regards,
Alan
Well observed, Janet – a fine tanka.
marion
This is such a strong poem. Excellent work!
Good one, Janet. i like it a lot
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November 26th, 2014 at 12:09 pm
What a wonderful jux. Subtle, poignant, relatable & powerful.
November 26th, 2014 at 1:02 pm
A very tight tanka, just goes to show how contemporary the form can be.
Excellent work!
warm regards,
Alan
November 26th, 2014 at 4:40 pm
Well observed, Janet – a fine tanka.
marion
November 26th, 2014 at 8:04 pm
This is such a strong poem. Excellent work!
November 27th, 2014 at 2:49 pm
Good one, Janet.
i like it a lot