old palace–
the guide speaks on
behalf of the king

14 Responses

  1. andreacecon Says:

    Great senryu – really enjoyed it :)

  2. Pravat Says:

    Thank you Andreacecon for your appreciation.

  3. kalaramesh Says:

    Lovely senryu, Pravat!
    Well caught!

  4. Pravat Says:

    Thank you Kala for your inspiration.

  5. Dave Read Says:

    A "guide" to the palace and the words of the king. Great stuff. :)

  6. Pravat Says:

    Thank you Dave for your kind comment and appreciation.

  7. sanjuktaa Says:

    Nice senryu! Very well-crafted!

  8. Pravat Says:

    Nice to hear from you, Sanjuktaa. Thank you for your words.I do enjoy reading your haiku.

  9. Alan Summers Says:

    Wonderful! And an intriguing reversal of roles.

    slug paths
    do they see through
    the eyes of God?

    Alan Summers
    Publication Credits:
    c.2.2. Anthology of short-verse ed. Brendan Slater & Alan Summers
    (Yet To Be Named Free Press 2013)

  10. Pravat Says:

    Thank you Alan for your comment. I always enjoy reading your wonderful haiku.

  11. Alan Summers Says:

    Your haiku also reminds me of a fabulous Kahlil Gibran short story where the overlord is ignored by people person by person until everyone ignores him and his ruthless and lazy manner.

  12. Pravat Says:

    Thank you, Dave, for your appreciation.

  13. jhon Says:

    Check the game out before you let your children play it. Make sure it is appropriate for their age by reading reviews and other details about the game online. Sometimes the rating isn't enough and it is best to check out what others have to say about the game and the contents of it.

  14. jhon Says:

    Sell your used games to buy new or new to you games. Video games are not cheap and some of them you have no use for after you beat. Do your research and find stores that buy used games. These stores will either pay you in cash or in store credit. This allows you to get games you want without spending a lot of money.

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