idling on the driveway my anger
—Dave Read
Issue 15.1 | 13 May 2015
Very much to the point – a fine senryu!
Whether you are going or coming, your anger has overtaken you and taken you over for a few moments. I feel I can empathise with this poem.
Succinct, beautifully expressed
Beautifully expressed.
Beautifully portrayed.
Our silent powers that regain our senses of morality, and civility. _m
Thanks everyone. I appreciate your positive comments.
Lovely* moment
Bill Kenney
*By which I mean, beautifully ugly.
LOL! That cracked me up. And thanks.
Wow! Very effective.
marion
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May 13th, 2015 at 12:13 pm
Very much to the point – a fine senryu!
May 13th, 2015 at 2:08 pm
Whether you are going or coming, your anger has overtaken you and taken you over for a few moments. I feel I can empathise with this poem.
May 13th, 2015 at 2:56 pm
Succinct, beautifully expressed
May 13th, 2015 at 2:58 pm
Beautifully expressed.
May 13th, 2015 at 7:10 pm
Beautifully portrayed.
May 13th, 2015 at 7:23 pm
Our silent powers that regain our senses of morality, and civility. _m
May 13th, 2015 at 8:11 pm
Thanks everyone. I appreciate your positive comments.
May 14th, 2015 at 7:29 am
Lovely* moment
Bill Kenney
*By which I mean, beautifully ugly.
May 14th, 2015 at 7:57 am
LOL! That cracked me up. And thanks.
May 15th, 2015 at 1:06 pm
Wow! Very effective.
marion