vet visit a couple leaves with a collar
—Alexander B. Joy
Issue 15.1 | 21 May 2015
Oh, my! Yes, I know this feeling.
Good senryu: I know that feeling…
Nice
Oh, yes. Only too well. I saw this a couple of years ago:
veterinarian’s – she leaves with a box and tears
Yours is simpler and leaves the emotion as an exercise for the reader. I think it works better than mine.
Devastating!
marion
I love the succinctness of yours, Alexander. It grabs the heart…
It's a feeling many of us can identify with.
after the vet greeted by the crush of silence
So sad, I'll never really get over our last family dog. . goodbye to autumn a day spent watching dogs walk their owners
Alan Summers Blithe Spirit (vol 23 no. 4 November 2012) .
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May 21st, 2015 at 10:00 am
Oh, my! Yes, I know this feeling.
May 21st, 2015 at 10:31 am
Good senryu: I know that feeling…
May 21st, 2015 at 2:00 pm
Nice
May 21st, 2015 at 11:44 pm
Oh, yes. Only too well. I saw this a couple of years ago:
veterinarian’s –
she leaves
with a box and tears
Yours is simpler and leaves the emotion as an exercise for the reader. I think it works better than mine.
May 22nd, 2015 at 12:44 am
Devastating!
marion
May 27th, 2015 at 5:36 am
I love the succinctness of yours, Alexander. It grabs the heart…
It's a feeling many of us can identify with.
after the vet
greeted by the crush
of silence
May 27th, 2015 at 3:37 pm
So sad, I'll never really get over our last family dog.
.
goodbye to autumn
a day spent watching dogs
walk their owners
Alan Summers
Blithe Spirit (vol 23 no. 4 November 2012)
.