a couple leaves
with a collar
—Alexander B. Joy
Issue 15.1 | 21 May 2015
Oh, my! Yes, I know this feeling.
Good senryu: I know that feeling…
Oh, yes. Only too well. I saw this a couple of years ago:
with a box and tears
Yours is simpler and leaves the emotion as an exercise for the reader. I think it works better than mine.
I love the succinctness of yours, Alexander. It grabs the heart…
It's a feeling many of us can identify with.
after the vet
greeted by the crush
So sad, I'll never really get over our last family dog.
goodbye to autumn
a day spent watching dogs
walk their owners
Blithe Spirit (vol 23 no. 4 November 2012)
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