this vagabond life-
symmetry in the wings of
a butterfly
Published by
Kashinath Karmakar
Kashinath Karmakar (kash poet) lives in Durgapur, India. An electrical engineer by profession he came to know about haiku in 2011 through a poetry site called poetrysoup. His works have appeared in various online and print journals like Frogpond, Tinywords,The Heron's Nest, Prune Juice and Creatrix. In 2013 & 2015 he won third prizes in Kusamakura International Haiku contest and in 2013 an HM in the Mainichi International Haiku Contest. His first book of long poetry Within my Dream was published in 2017 from Authorspress Publishers, Delhi. View all posts by Kashinath Karmakar
Absolutely lovely! Symmetry stays even as we wander.
Love it.
Love it, too!
Good one, Kash.
Fresh and it's nicely done!
__Just my humble echo to your fine haiku, Kashinath; the symmetry, that mirrored image of a butterfly's wings. _m
a monarch
its wings on the soft breeze
this essence
Niiice KP! Totally unlike your usual, if I may say so
Nice one Kashi- order in disorder.
Thanks to all of you for your inspiring words!It means a lot to me.
Magyar,that is a lovely haiku!
I truly thank you Kashinath; each wing, an essence of the other._m
Wonderfully done! Loved "vagabond life".
Life comes full circle, and one may in the course of things gain the freedom to become a vagabond, flitting here and there……very nice!
Good one! though I must say I did not get this in one go…but on re-reading this I find this absolutely wonderful!
A lovely sense of freedom in this.
marion
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this vagabond life-
symmetry in the wings of
a butterfly
—KASHINATH KARMAKAR
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Ah, but Kash, we also have symmetry in our wings, if we acknowledge. :-)
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Sirocco winds-
the leaves spinning out
of butterfly dreams
Alan Summers
Scope vol 60 no. 4 (May 2014)
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I liked it so much, hard to express my gratitude to the poet. The lines resonates with me.