So many contradictions, and how some of use peace as an excuse to use force.
A very thoughtful haiku. I've unfortunately experienced this very early one morning and although just an early commuter, felt I was going to be attacked, but by the police. There was no one else on the station platform but me and a large group of heavily riot armoured and bored policeMEN.
May 26th, 2015 at 9:09 am
Wow! Beautiful.
May 26th, 2015 at 9:41 am
So many contradictions, and how some of use peace as an excuse to use force.
A very thoughtful haiku. I've unfortunately experienced this very early one morning and although just an early commuter, felt I was going to be attacked, but by the police. There was no one else on the station platform but me and a large group of heavily riot armoured and bored policeMEN.
Alan
May 26th, 2015 at 10:42 am
__Such realism in your senryu, Roberta; politically dressing to the contrary, in order to emphasize the need of peace_!
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May 26th, 2015 at 12:25 pm
Perfect! This is award winning for everything that you have managed to encompass in so few words. Thank you!
May 27th, 2015 at 5:27 am
So well crafted! I've always been struck by the irony of this issue.
May 28th, 2015 at 8:23 am
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