how long can a robin hold its song in autumn my late father’s words stirring my soul
—Ramesh Anand
Issue 15.1 | 28 May 2015
Nicely worded, Ramesh
Thanks Kala!
Heartful Tanka. _m
Thanks Magyar!
Nicely composed.
Thanks Pravat!
Very touching — and the placement of 'in autumn' is extremely effective. Well done!
Thanks Marie!
Very moving tanka!
Thanks Joshua!
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May 28th, 2015 at 9:42 am
Nicely worded, Ramesh
May 29th, 2015 at 12:18 am
Thanks Kala!
May 28th, 2015 at 10:03 am
Heartful Tanka.
_m
May 29th, 2015 at 12:19 am
Thanks Magyar!
May 28th, 2015 at 10:42 am
Nicely composed.
May 29th, 2015 at 12:18 am
Thanks Pravat!
May 28th, 2015 at 1:08 pm
Very touching — and the placement of 'in autumn' is extremely effective. Well done!
May 29th, 2015 at 12:17 am
Thanks Marie!
May 29th, 2015 at 3:00 pm
Very moving tanka!
May 29th, 2015 at 11:01 pm
Thanks Joshua!