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12 Responses

1. Pravat Says:
   June 11th, 2015 at 7:09 pm

   Beautiful Ku. A haiku with substance!

2. haikuapprentice Says:
   June 11th, 2015 at 8:57 pm

   How nice to see another poem by Paresh. I enjoy the observations of very "ordinary" human experiences in his work – in spirit akin to Buson.

   From the abruptness of the opening to the closing word "rumble", I detect and enjoy a sense of playfulness, and everyday familial humour. Life is full of such moments, and we are all the richer when a poet like Paresh helps us learn to see and capture the poetry of them.

   Strider

3. kalaramesh Says:
   June 11th, 2015 at 9:39 pm

   Very nicely captured moment, Paresh

4. th. vandergrau Says:
   June 13th, 2015 at 4:38 am

   Very good!

5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:
   June 15th, 2015 at 1:25 am

   I could hear the child complaining that he can't go out to play because of the weather. Well observed and crafted, Paresh.

   marion

6. Alan Summers Says:
   June 17th, 2015 at 12:07 pm

   .
   cloudburst …
   my son adds his voice
   to the rumble

   —PARESH TIWARI
   .
   The wonder of a child connecting to the important and natural things in life. Magical.
   .
   .
   a girl in a stone the big ask for clouds to be more bluer

   [monostich]

   Alan Summers
   Does Fish-God Know (YTBN Press 2012)

7. Famous urdu poetry Says:
   June 20th, 2015 at 8:35 am

   Nice One The Graet

8. Fauzi Says:
   June 22nd, 2015 at 7:11 pm

   great information, thank you…

9. Brian Keanton Says:
   June 24th, 2015 at 5:30 am

   Thanks!

10. islamic book in urdu Says:
    June 29th, 2015 at 12:15 pm

    Excellent Great blog here!

11. Trix Says:
    May 26th, 2016 at 7:53 pm

    This has made my day. I wish all poitnsgs were this good.

12. 5 pounds in 2 weeks Says:
    November 18th, 2016 at 8:55 am

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