cloudburst …
my son adds his voice
to the rumble

—

Issue 15.1 | 11 June 2015

12 Responses

  1. Pravat Says:
    June 11th, 2015 at 7:09 pm

    Beautiful Ku. A haiku with substance!

  2. haikuapprentice Says:
    June 11th, 2015 at 8:57 pm

    How nice to see another poem by Paresh. I enjoy the observations of very "ordinary" human experiences in his work – in spirit akin to Buson.

    From the abruptness of the opening to the closing word "rumble", I detect and enjoy a sense of playfulness, and everyday familial humour. Life is full of such moments, and we are all the richer when a poet like Paresh helps us learn to see and capture the poetry of them.

    Strider

  3. kalaramesh Says:
    June 11th, 2015 at 9:39 pm

    Very nicely captured moment, Paresh

  4. th. vandergrau Says:
    June 13th, 2015 at 4:38 am

    Very good!

  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:
    June 15th, 2015 at 1:25 am

    I could hear the child complaining that he can't go out to play because of the weather. Well observed and crafted, Paresh.

    marion

  6. Alan Summers Says:
    June 17th, 2015 at 12:07 pm

    .
    cloudburst …
    my son adds his voice
    to the rumble

    —PARESH TIWARI
    .
    The wonder of a child connecting to the important and natural things in life. Magical.
    .
    .
    a girl in a stone the big ask for clouds to be more bluer

    [monostich]

    Alan Summers
    Does Fish-God Know (YTBN Press 2012)

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    June 20th, 2015 at 8:35 am

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    June 22nd, 2015 at 7:11 pm

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  9. Brian Keanton Says:
    June 24th, 2015 at 5:30 am

    Thanks!

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    June 29th, 2015 at 12:15 pm

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    May 26th, 2016 at 7:53 pm

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