end of story you peel your tangerine in one continuous piece
—Olivier Schopfer
Issue 15.1 | 16 June 2015
Superb clash of imagery, making me wonder so much about the in-between the lines, and outside of the lines into actual events:
—OLIVIER SCHOPFER
Such an effective first line, and sublime phrase in those last two lines.
Alan
Thank you very much, Alan. As always, your words mean a lot to me.
Love-it, Olivier_! __Oh yes… it can be done, then wound back into a hollow echo… as is mine below. Smiles _! _m
this reset an empty tangerine peal fragrance lingers
Thanks a lot, Magyar. Glad to inspire you ;-)
Such defiance! Lovely.
Thank you, Sharon.
once again your tiny words delight kh
Lovely poem Oliver
This is so cool! Great imagery. Why didn't I think of that :)
Thank you so much, Natasha. Happy to read your website, love "autumn wind".
This work with deep meaning and lot of symbols. Big things like life can be shown in little things. You have develop imaginary to combine things like that.
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June 16th, 2015 at 9:26 am
Superb clash of imagery, making me wonder so much about the in-between the lines, and outside of the lines into actual events:
end of story
you peel your tangerine
in one continuous piece
—OLIVIER SCHOPFER
Such an effective first line, and sublime phrase in those last two lines.
Alan
June 16th, 2015 at 2:12 pm
Thank you very much, Alan. As always, your words mean a lot to me.
June 16th, 2015 at 12:09 pm
Love-it, Olivier_!
__Oh yes… it can be done, then wound back into a hollow echo… as is mine below. Smiles _!
_m
this reset
an empty tangerine peal
fragrance lingers
June 16th, 2015 at 2:21 pm
Thanks a lot, Magyar. Glad to inspire you ;-)
June 16th, 2015 at 1:44 pm
Such defiance! Lovely.
June 16th, 2015 at 2:13 pm
Thank you, Sharon.
June 16th, 2015 at 5:23 pm
once again
your tiny words
delight
kh
Lovely poem Oliver
June 16th, 2015 at 7:29 pm
This is so cool! Great imagery. Why didn't I think of that :)
June 17th, 2015 at 1:35 am
Thank you so much, Natasha. Happy to read your website, love "autumn wind".
July 8th, 2015 at 12:44 pm
This work with deep meaning and lot of symbols. Big things like life can be shown in little things. You have develop imaginary to combine things like that.