Brilliant ku Beverly. There is such humour in the observation, but also I sense in the choice of constructing the verse in a single line – the tadpoles are not big enough to "jump" like a Basho frog, onto a second or third line!
Really enjoyable. And congratulations on your first publication in Tinywords. I look forward to reading many more of your poems in the future.
September 15th, 2015 at 10:29 am
Going for a morning walk and absolutely love this.
September 15th, 2015 at 3:23 pm
Magical!
marion
September 16th, 2015 at 6:01 am
Wonderful!
September 21st, 2015 at 4:33 am
Brilliant ku Beverly. There is such humour in the observation, but also I sense in the choice of constructing the verse in a single line – the tadpoles are not big enough to "jump" like a Basho frog, onto a second or third line!
Really enjoyable. And congratulations on your first publication in Tinywords. I look forward to reading many more of your poems in the future.
Strider