she waves a thin blue scarf becoming sky


11 Responses

  1. Sheila Sondik Says:

    Gorgeous and transporting haiku! The reader can assume so many different cuts — each one satisfying and a bit mysterious.

  2. Garry Says:

    Good one Lorin!

    hauling in
    his clothesline
    three sheets to the wind

  3. Ellen Grace Olinger Says:

    Dear Lorin, A lovely poem. Thank you.

  4. Allison Says:

    Still love your style Lorin. Fabulous work!

  5. Tash Adams Says:

    Oh what a beautiful haiku!

  6. Dawn Apanius Says:

    Definitely one for my notebook of favorites. Superb!

  7. Helen Buckingham Says:

    So beautiful, Lorin – endlessly evocative – at once saddening and uplifting. I go along with Dawn in that it's one of my favourite ku of late, I just keep returning to it…..

  8. Bruce Feingold Says:

    Light and graceful. I especially enjoyed the experience of the self and the scarf
    blending into "nature"

  9. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Beautiful, Lorin – so visual.


  10. Theresa C. Says:

    Love the touch of nostalgia in this haiku, Lorin!

  11. hammerandtongs Says:

    Beautiful, evocative, transforming.

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