Haiga by Jane Williams
letting go
     the party continues
          without us

7 Responses

  1. papagreenbean Says:

    A poem about death perhaps. It makes me think that none of us are the center of the universe. Thanks.

    star gazing
    earth is not
    the bullseye

  2. Lamart Cooper Says:

    A lovely haiga!

    A fitting placement of words with the image.

    tethered to canes
    one step closer
    to the next..


  3. Helen Buckingham Says:

    Love the simplicity – deftly executed.

    her red balloon

    (The Mainichi Daily News, 16th September, 2015)

  4. Bill Kenney Says:

    waving goodnight
    after the party
    autumn chill

    Lovely ku.

  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    As a mother of two teens, this brought a lump to my throat, as I dread the day when they will think life is more fun without their parents…but I guess it's inevitable. :(

    Great ku.


  6. Chae Says:

    in a falling sky
    blinds me

  7. hammerandtongs Says:

    Sad and uplifting at the same time. Freeing too.

    wizened gardner

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