we order Cognac I ignore how you ignore her texts
—Maria Bonsanti
Issue 15.2 | 1 January 2016
cool — how "ignore" used twice in a tinywords poem works so well.
Good one.
The keys are 'I' and 'you'. Your double negative… reaches to a positive; the first sip.
text clouds letters begin to fall alpharain _m
Ten words the story of infidelity
Yes, sometimes just a few words are needed to tell universal truths.
So subtle so sexy so smooth.
Thank you all for your kind comments.
. Ah, what we do around alcohol. :-) . .
sunday lunch the chatter of children among hard drinkers
Alan Summers Haiku Harvest vol. 4 no. 1 (2003) . .
Ooh – a lot of backstory here. If he can be unfaithful once, he'll find easier the next time!
marion
the "her" is not necessarily the wife ;)
The plot thickens! :) :) :)
and we are left conjuring who the 'we' are who order cognac together, and one studiously ignoring the action of the other.
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January 1st, 2016 at 8:13 am
cool — how "ignore" used twice in a tinywords poem works so well.
January 1st, 2016 at 8:21 am
Good one.
January 1st, 2016 at 8:56 am
The keys are 'I' and 'you'. Your double negative… reaches to a positive; the first sip.
January 1st, 2016 at 8:43 am
text clouds
letters begin to fall
alpharain
_m
January 1st, 2016 at 10:19 am
Ten words
the story of infidelity
January 2nd, 2016 at 8:35 pm
Yes, sometimes just a few words are needed to tell universal truths.
January 1st, 2016 at 3:39 pm
So subtle so sexy so smooth.
January 2nd, 2016 at 8:38 pm
Thank you all for your kind comments.
January 3rd, 2016 at 10:35 am
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Ah, what we do around alcohol. :-)
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.
sunday lunch
the chatter of children
among hard drinkers
Alan Summers
Haiku Harvest vol. 4 no. 1 (2003)
.
.
January 7th, 2016 at 4:01 pm
Ooh – a lot of backstory here. If he can be unfaithful once, he'll find easier the next time!
marion
January 12th, 2016 at 9:36 pm
the "her" is not necessarily the wife ;)
January 13th, 2016 at 9:23 am
The plot thickens! :) :) :)
May 25th, 2016 at 8:52 pm
and we are left conjuring who the 'we' are who order cognac together, and one studiously ignoring the action of the other.