landscape
A few strokes to complete the mountainscape. Darken the clouds and smudge the trees with my little finger. Something is still missing?
half moon ? the voice that is stuck in my vocal cords
—Geethanjali Rajan
Issue 16.1 | 10 June 2016
Bali beach full moon on full moon
2/14/15 @ 4am, inspired by a Valentine’s Day romantic rush!
Beautiful and thought provoking –the less than full moon and the stuck voice. This one deserves remembering.
Beautiful
The beauty of this compact haibun lies in what is left out . . . Waxing moon . . . much more than meets the eye
Very beautifully put together, Geethanjali. The prose and the ku complete the 'circle' for me! Well done.
I shall treasure this one!
your beautiful haibun pulls regretful emotion to the surface…with a strong, un-relaxing grip…
Fantastic!
The prose and the haiku complement and complete each other.. Lovely
Both prose and haiku embellish each other. Well done!
Beautiful, Geethanjali!
Beautiful. The missing half-moon, the voice stuck in the throat….
summer dusk between the canyon boulders an old sob
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June 10th, 2016 at 1:53 pm
Bali beach
full moon on
full moon
2/14/15 @ 4am, inspired by a
Valentine’s Day romantic rush!
June 10th, 2016 at 2:00 pm
Beautiful and thought provoking –the less than full moon and the stuck voice. This one deserves remembering.
June 10th, 2016 at 2:04 pm
Beautiful
June 10th, 2016 at 2:21 pm
The beauty of this compact haibun lies in what is left out . . .
Waxing moon . . . much more than meets the eye
June 10th, 2016 at 4:00 pm
Very beautifully put together, Geethanjali. The prose and the ku complete the 'circle' for me!
Well done.
June 10th, 2016 at 5:00 pm
I shall treasure this one!
June 10th, 2016 at 7:42 pm
your beautiful haibun pulls regretful emotion to the surface…with a strong, un-relaxing grip…
June 10th, 2016 at 7:52 pm
Fantastic!
June 10th, 2016 at 11:36 pm
The prose and the haiku complement and complete each other.. Lovely
June 11th, 2016 at 3:34 am
Both prose and haiku embellish each other. Well done!
June 11th, 2016 at 7:37 am
Beautiful, Geethanjali!
June 11th, 2016 at 2:00 pm
Beautiful. The missing half-moon, the voice stuck in the throat….
June 14th, 2016 at 11:49 am
summer dusk
between the canyon boulders
an old sob