A few strokes to complete the mountainscape. Darken the clouds and smudge the trees with my little finger. Something is still missing…
half moon –
the voice that is stuck
in my vocal cords
Issue 16.1 | 10 June 2016
full moon on
2/14/15 @ 4am, inspired by a
Valentine’s Day romantic rush!
Beautiful and thought provoking –the less than full moon and the stuck voice. This one deserves remembering.
The beauty of this compact haibun lies in what is left out . . .
Waxing moon . . . much more than meets the eye
Very beautifully put together, Geethanjali. The prose and the ku complete the 'circle' for me!
I shall treasure this one!
your beautiful haibun pulls regretful emotion to the surface…with a strong, un-relaxing grip…
The prose and the haiku complement and complete each other.. Lovely
Both prose and haiku embellish each other. Well done!
Beautiful. The missing half-moon, the voice stuck in the throat….
between the canyon boulders
an old sob
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