out of silence the piccolo player’s bright red nails
Issue 16.1 | 13 June 2016
Good one, Susan!
Thanks for taking time to comment, Kala.
Lovely – that flash of colour is a perfect juxtaposition with the lively piccolo.
It's nice to 'see' you, Lynne. Thanks so much!
I hear that red! Thank you.
Good ears, Sheila! Thank you!
What a flash of brilliance–the red so unexpected!
I couldn't take my eyes off them, Mary Jo. I appreciate your comment.
Perfect for the one liner as I see the line of holes on the piccolo.
…and those nails were definitely in a hurry, Lynn. You saw what I saw. Thanks!
Great to see you still producing beautiful haiku. Well done Susan
Those singing, dancing nails … beautifully witnessed.
tourist season one by one the statues blink back
Thank you, Jane, for your comment and your haiku.
Wonderful. What breaks the silence is not the sound of the piccolo but the loudness of the bright red nails.
Thanks for that reading. You're so right!
ha! love it. the sound drawing the eyes
Mail (will not be published) (required)
All contents copyright (c) the indicated authors and artists,
except as noted.
. Comments RSS
Log in .