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16 Responses

1. kalaramesh Says:
   June 13th, 2016 at 8:25 am

   Good one, Susan!

2. Susan Says:
   June 13th, 2016 at 2:15 pm

   Thanks for taking time to comment, Kala.

3. Lynne Rees Says:
   June 13th, 2016 at 8:27 am

   Lovely – that flash of colour is a perfect juxtaposition with the lively piccolo.

4. Susan Says:
   June 13th, 2016 at 2:12 pm

   It's nice to 'see' you, Lynne. Thanks so much!

5. Sheila Sondik Says:
   June 13th, 2016 at 8:39 am

   I hear that red! Thank you.

6. Susan Says:
   June 13th, 2016 at 2:13 pm

   Good ears, Sheila! Thank you!

7. Mary Jo Says:
   June 13th, 2016 at 9:07 am

   What a flash of brilliance–the red so unexpected!

8. Susan Says:
   June 13th, 2016 at 2:14 pm

   I couldn't take my eyes off them, Mary Jo. I appreciate your comment.

9. Lynn Edge Says:
   June 13th, 2016 at 9:57 am

   Perfect for the one liner as I see the line of holes on the piccolo.

10. Susan Says:
    June 13th, 2016 at 2:15 pm

    …and those nails were definitely in a hurry, Lynn. You saw what I saw. Thanks!

11. Allison Says:
    June 13th, 2016 at 3:54 pm

    Great to see you still producing beautiful haiku. Well done Susan

12. janewilliams Says:
    June 13th, 2016 at 4:39 pm

    Those singing, dancing nails … beautifully witnessed.

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13. Susan Says:
    June 14th, 2016 at 7:38 pm

    Thank you, Jane, for your comment and your haiku.

14. hammerandtongs Says:
    June 13th, 2016 at 11:37 pm

    Wonderful. What breaks the silence is not the sound of the piccolo but the loudness of the bright red nails.

15. Susan Says:
    June 14th, 2016 at 7:36 pm

    Thanks for that reading. You're so right!

16. agnesevasavich Says:
    June 15th, 2016 at 10:45 am

    ha! love it. the sound drawing the eyes

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