dory crossing
the light labor
of a gull


3 Responses

  1. klacsanzky Says:

    Great comparison. It shows nature in its mercy and mercilessness, in my opinion.

  2. MaryJo Says:

    I liked this Garry–I'm not exactly sure what it means but I can kind of see it–it's beautiful.

  3. magyar Says:

    The gull, unseen by the oarsman, has gained an easier trip to the pier pilings.
    __I like your senryu Garry, it generates parallel ideas; nifty. _m

    dory cruise
    the gull perched on its stem
    squeaky oarlocks

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