budding trees
the letter wide open
to suggestions
gently her tongue slides
sealing the envelope
This is a tan renga, a form of linked verse, by Anna Maris and Marcus Liljedahl.
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budding trees
the letter wide open
to suggestions
gently her tongue slides
sealing the envelope
This is a tan renga, a form of linked verse, by Anna Maris and Marcus Liljedahl.
__Thought filled verse, quite nice Anna; I add my two humble lines. _m
teary steps to the mailbox
she sets the red flag
Red flag, that RFD hint of outgoing mail.
Amazing
Magyar, I like the openness of your two lines. What will happen next. The red flag –connotation of red.
I also very much enjoyed the renga as it is.
Thank you Mary Jo:
__Here, I simply complement Marcus and his two fine lines… that close Anna's haiku. _m