__Typo or not, it mazes me think; we understand we must stand by our tenets… as your verse illustrates so well Bruce.
__Leggo my eggo_? Perhaps Legos, those toy building blocks_? Smiles_!
futile argument
as lightning bolts strike
toy building blocks
_m
tonnerre de neige
amenée par le vent l’odeur
du renard
Original haiku by Alan Summers
French version by Serge Tome
Publications credits:
fox dreams (April 2012) edited by Aubrie Cox;
and Temps Libre Coups de coeur – Favourites (Du 16 au 31 janvier 2013)
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gunsmoke tea
a dog argues
itself to death
Alan Summers
Publication Credits: Does Fish-God Know (YTBN Press 2012)
July 5th, 2016 at 10:16 am
is that a typo? leg go OR let go
July 5th, 2016 at 11:58 am
__Typo or not, it mazes me think; we understand we must stand by our tenets… as your verse illustrates so well Bruce.
__Leggo my eggo_? Perhaps Legos, those toy building blocks_? Smiles_!
futile argument
as lightning bolts strike
toy building blocks
_m
July 5th, 2016 at 12:23 pm
a/o 1515 EDT: leg, reset to let.
July 10th, 2016 at 2:26 pm
blue moon
behind the two lovers
distant fires
July 12th, 2016 at 9:28 am
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thunder snow
the wind-shifting scent
of fox
tonnerre de neige
amenée par le vent l’odeur
du renard
Original haiku by Alan Summers
French version by Serge Tome
Publications credits:
fox dreams (April 2012) edited by Aubrie Cox;
and Temps Libre Coups de coeur – Favourites (Du 16 au 31 janvier 2013)
.
.
gunsmoke tea
a dog argues
itself to death
Alan Summers
Publication Credits: Does Fish-God Know (YTBN Press 2012)