ascension —
sunlight through the wings
of the shad fly
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Marianne Paul
Marianne Paul is a Canadian novelist and poet with a keen interest in minimalist poetry. Her work has been published in A Hundred Gourds, The Heron's Nest, Acorn, Modern Haiku, Bones, Frozen Butterfly, and Daily Haiku. She has recently (and joyfully) been experimenting with concrete poetry and word play.
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Love this!
Wonderful.
Very beautiful!
—–
A brief life
But an endless horizon
Marianne
So much up drifting good energy in this ku!
Jan Benson
Graphic and uplifting. To be read again and again.
Very beautiful, Marianne.
Yes! Thank you, Marianne, this is lovely!
Yes, a gorgeous haiku !
Thank you!
-Marianne Paul
I love the occasional high register word in haiku. I have a couple up my sleeve too. :-)
"ascension" is a wonderfully mellifluous choice!
Your haiku is then beautifully 'grounded' with naming the type of fly:
ascension—
sunlight through the wings
of the shad fly
—MARIANNE PAUL
The shad fly is deeply embedded in culture and a very haiku subject due to its fleeting transience akin to cherry blossom.
"The name shadfly is from the Atlantic fish the shad, which runs up American East Coast rivers at the same time as many mayflies emerge."
Wikipedia
warm regards,
Alan
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So simple and wonderful
I love it, Marianne! :)
marion