burning bush
what to become
when I’m old

6 Responses

  1. magyar Says:

    __ The ashes can wait 'til another time; smiles and best wishes Elmedin, as our flames continue to rise_!

    new days
    step beyond this heated blaze
    cinders wait


  2. Jean LeBlanc Says:

    How beautiful. Thank you for this.

  3. Valentina Says:

    A question that many ask .

  4. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    An arresting ku.


  5. Alan Summers Says:

    Dear Elmedin,

    Reminded of Charlton Heston, an actor who played strong religious characters yet so flawed in real life.

    burning bush
    what to become
    when I’m old


    A poem of many layers.

    I am still discovering who and what I will become, been doing that ever since childhood. :-) It's important to come back to childhood even when we are forced to be "adults".

    Milky Way Train
    I bring my inner child
    down to earth

    Alan Summers
    hedgerow: a journal of small poems (Issue 1, September 2014)


  6. martin1223 Says:

    the silence
    above a crematorium
    night sky

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