night pond – the Big Dipper full of leaves
(originally appeared in Cattails, May 2016)
—Zuzanna Truchlewska
Issue 16.2 | 5 December 2016
Sweet and poignant. Perfect in its way.
__ Within the Spring moonlight, we see the new green leaves dancing in that star-form; such a grand life attraction, Zuzanna!
My echo to complement, in the Autumn we may see and hear:
the Big Dipper empties its fallen leaves owls count
Smiles_! _m
Thank you. Beautiful to look at.
. . night pond – the Big Dipper full of leaves
—ZUZANNA TRUCHLEWSKA
Love the opening line, and the fantastic phrase:
the Big Dipper full of leaves
Great!
Geart, I like it
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December 5th, 2016 at 9:47 am
Sweet and poignant. Perfect in its way.
December 5th, 2016 at 9:52 am
__ Within the Spring moonlight, we see the new green leaves dancing in that star-form; such a grand life attraction, Zuzanna!
My echo to complement, in the Autumn we may see and hear:
the Big Dipper
empties its fallen leaves
owls count
Smiles_! _m
December 5th, 2016 at 9:58 am
Thank you. Beautiful to look at.
December 7th, 2016 at 11:54 am
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night pond –
the Big Dipper full
of leaves
(originally appeared in Cattails, May 2016)
—ZUZANNA TRUCHLEWSKA
Love the opening line, and the fantastic phrase:
the Big Dipper full
of leaves
Great!
April 17th, 2017 at 2:23 am
Geart, I like it