a glimpse of the puppeteer?s

10 Responses

  1. Pat Tompkins Says:

    Excellent, as always, from Lorin.

  2. MaryJo Says:

    So unexpected. I really like this.

  3. janewilliams Says:

    Suspension of disbelief interrupted. Love it.

  4. Michelle Schaefer Says:

    Startling,amazing…I’m glad puppeteers are still alive and well. :). Well done Lorin

  5. John S Green Says:

    I like the imagery… yes!

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  7. Garry Says:

    Great poem! A thunderclap!

  8. aniketnik Says:

    For quite sometime efforts were made to ascertian future. Then all of a sudden something came to mind and all attention was diverted to the present moment. As of now all attention is being given to the fact that work is in progress.

  9. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    On first reading, I found this quite humorous. Then I thought how the puppeteer might refer to a person controlling the heavens. Nice work, Lorin.


  10. marykendall Says:

    This takes the reader by surprise…beautifully done, Lorin.

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