birdsong
a boy gently holds
a string of firecrackers

 

3 Responses

  1. Magyar Says:

    ___ This young innocence seen as a rabbit's thumping foot, that unmistakable sound of nature as it notes a forest intrusion; a spring walk into the greening forest. "Who am I" to say? Smiles! _m

    a rabbits drum
    its signal of intrusion
    spring hike

  2. Magyar Says:

    __ Often, that which I read, stirs my mind's sediment. I see the innocence here, as the boy holding the firecrackers… to not to intrude on the birdsong; the rabbit's signal, a parallel to that innocence. _m

  3. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    The use of 'gently' shows a certain reverence from the child.

    marion

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