wildflowers never make promises
—Claudette Russell
Issue 17.1 | 4 May 2017
I love your haiku!
loves me loves me not shredded daisies
Do you think we often make promises out of fear?
At any rate, you have written a splendid haiku!
That made me laugh–great one!
Content is the king. Flowers give fragrance. Wildflowers occupy space however of no use. Hence wildflowers never make promises.
Ha – excellent. Don't try to tame this narrator! :)
marion
does it not matter that its not an actual haiku? 5 7 5?
only the wake at the river's bend wildflowers
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May 4th, 2017 at 9:18 am
I love your haiku!
loves me
loves me not
shredded daisies
May 4th, 2017 at 12:29 pm
Do you think we often make promises out of fear?
At any rate, you have written a splendid haiku!
May 4th, 2017 at 3:27 pm
That made me laugh–great one!
May 4th, 2017 at 6:17 pm
Content is the king. Flowers give fragrance. Wildflowers occupy space however of no use. Hence wildflowers never make promises.
May 8th, 2017 at 3:16 am
Ha – excellent. Don't try to tame this narrator! :)
marion
June 20th, 2017 at 2:19 pm
does it not matter that its not an actual haiku? 5 7 5?
September 28th, 2020 at 1:40 pm
only the wake
at the river's bend
wildflowers