wildflowers
never make
promises
Published by
Claudette Russell
Claudette Russell is a retired high school English teacher who lives with her husband in Goodwin State Forest in Hampton, Connecticut. Her work has appeared in various print and online journals. She also collaborates with her husband to create haiga. View all posts by Claudette Russell
I love your haiku!
loves me
loves me not
shredded daisies
Do you think we often make promises out of fear?
At any rate, you have written a splendid haiku!
That made me laugh–great one!
Content is the king. Flowers give fragrance. Wildflowers occupy space however of no use. Hence wildflowers never make promises.
Ha – excellent. Don't try to tame this narrator! :)
marion
does it not matter that its not an actual haiku? 5 7 5?
only the wake
at the river's bend
wildflowers