never make

7 Responses

  1. Mike Schoenburg I Says:

    I love your haiku!

    loves me
    loves me not
    shredded daisies

  2. MaryJo Says:

    Do you think we often make promises out of fear?

    At any rate, you have written a splendid haiku!

  3. Matt Says:

    That made me laugh–great one!

  4. aniketnik Says:

    Content is the king. Flowers give fragrance. Wildflowers occupy space however of no use. Hence wildflowers never make promises.

  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Ha – excellent. Don't try to tame this narrator! :)


  6. Katherine Says:

    does it not matter that its not an actual haiku? 5 7 5?

  7. martin1223 Says:

    only the wake
    at the river's bend

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