a good chance
she’ll change her mind ?


7 Responses

  1. Lynne Rees Says:

    Lovely, Susan.

  2. MaryJo Says:

    Like this. A lot of images come to mind for me in the word sunshowers–I like the music also of chance, change, sunshowers

  3. janewilliams Says:

    Light but layered, love it.

  4. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Wonderful, Susan – a touch of karumi in this one! :)


  5. Susan Says:

    Thank you for your lovely comments, Lynne, MaryJo, Jane, and Marion. I'm so glad you enjoyed this haiku.

  6. aniketnik Says:

    Absolutely interesting. Definitely it's layered, but the end is perfect and that is what makes it interesting. A perfect end.

  7. marykendall Says:

    I love that you ended with "sun showers" in this haiku. It brings up so many possibilities, and the imagery is excellent.

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