a good chance she’ll change her mind — sunshowers
—Susan Constable
Issue 17.1 | 16 May 2017
Lovely, Susan.
Like this. A lot of images come to mind for me in the word sunshowers–I like the music also of chance, change, sunshowers
Light but layered, love it.
Wonderful, Susan – a touch of karumi in this one! :)
marion
Thank you for your lovely comments, Lynne, MaryJo, Jane, and Marion. I'm so glad you enjoyed this haiku.
Absolutely interesting. Definitely it's layered, but the end is perfect and that is what makes it interesting. A perfect end.
I love that you ended with "sun showers" in this haiku. It brings up so many possibilities, and the imagery is excellent.
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May 16th, 2017 at 10:33 am
Lovely, Susan.
May 16th, 2017 at 3:13 pm
Like this. A lot of images come to mind for me in the word sunshowers–I like the music also of chance, change, sunshowers
May 17th, 2017 at 2:35 am
Light but layered, love it.
May 17th, 2017 at 3:03 am
Wonderful, Susan – a touch of karumi in this one! :)
marion
May 18th, 2017 at 4:56 pm
Thank you for your lovely comments, Lynne, MaryJo, Jane, and Marion. I'm so glad you enjoyed this haiku.
May 18th, 2017 at 10:49 pm
Absolutely interesting. Definitely it's layered, but the end is perfect and that is what makes it interesting. A perfect end.
June 13th, 2017 at 9:08 am
I love that you ended with "sun showers" in this haiku. It brings up so many possibilities, and the imagery is excellent.