a good chance
she’ll change her mind —
Issue 17.1 | 16 May 2017
Like this. A lot of images come to mind for me in the word sunshowers–I like the music also of chance, change, sunshowers
Light but layered, love it.
Wonderful, Susan – a touch of karumi in this one! :)
Thank you for your lovely comments, Lynne, MaryJo, Jane, and Marion. I'm so glad you enjoyed this haiku.
Absolutely interesting. Definitely it's layered, but the end is perfect and that is what makes it interesting. A perfect end.
I love that you ended with "sun showers" in this haiku. It brings up so many possibilities, and the imagery is excellent.
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