a good chance
she’ll change her mind ?
sunshowers

 

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Susan Constable

Susan Constable mainly writes haiku and tanka, receiving her inspiration from life on the west coast of Canada. Her work is widely published in both print and online journals, as well as in numerous anthologies. She has judged several contests as well as co-edited a couple of haiku and tanka anthologies She was the tanka editor for the online journal A Hundred Gourds from March 2012 to June 2016.

7 thoughts on “”

  1. Like this. A lot of images come to mind for me in the word sunshowers–I like the music also of chance, change, sunshowers

  2. Thank you for your lovely comments, Lynne, MaryJo, Jane, and Marion. I'm so glad you enjoyed this haiku.

  3. Absolutely interesting. Definitely it's layered, but the end is perfect and that is what makes it interesting. A perfect end.

  4. I love that you ended with "sun showers" in this haiku. It brings up so many possibilities, and the imagery is excellent.

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