remembrance day the gate clangs against its lock
—Alexander B. Joy
Issue 17.1 | 29 May 2017
Good take on a tough theme.
white crosses arrayed in smart columns and rows the peace of the dead
Very well defined, since each and every line speaks for itself.
Excellent!
Great use of sound. The never-ending clanging made me think that nothing has changed and, like war, this sound will continue – like a death toll.
marion
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May 29th, 2017 at 8:30 am
Good take on a tough theme.
May 29th, 2017 at 9:03 am
white crosses arrayed
in smart columns and rows
the peace of the dead
May 29th, 2017 at 9:41 pm
Very well defined, since each and every line speaks for itself.
May 30th, 2017 at 6:02 pm
Excellent!
May 31st, 2017 at 2:37 pm
Great use of sound. The never-ending clanging made me think that nothing has changed and, like war, this sound will continue – like a death toll.
marion