filaments of snow

           drifting sideways

                     on the wind--

                             old pines

                                     shed their ghosts

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Jenny Ward Angyal

Jenny Ward Angyal lives on a small organic farm in Gibsonville, NC, USA, with her husband and one Abyssinian cat. Her tanka have appeared in various online and print journals and may also be found at www.grassminstrel.blogspot.com

6 thoughts on “”

  1. Beautiful placement of the poem self interpretation and clear image with subtle gently falling visionary ending… a moment alive on the page, Jenny!

  2. Beautiful, Jenny. I agree with Kathabela, the placement works perfectly here and the imagery is just brilliant.

  3. ooh pretty. I can just see it just the way it would look like a little nature film, and feel that ghostly chill

  4. .
    filaments of snow

    drifting sideways

    on the wind–

    old pines

    shed their ghosts

    —JENNY WARD ANGYAL
    .
    Wonderful feel to this especially when I read it out aloud.

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