filaments of snow
drifting sideways
on the wind--
old pines
shed their ghosts
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filaments of snow
drifting sideways
on the wind--
old pines
shed their ghosts
Heading out shortly into the summer heat. I'll take this lovely tanka with me!
Thank you!
Beautiful placement of the poem self interpretation and clear image with subtle gently falling visionary ending… a moment alive on the page, Jenny!
Beautiful, Jenny. I agree with Kathabela, the placement works perfectly here and the imagery is just brilliant.
So believable, Jenny.
Imagination, craft and art form – all rolled into one!
ooh pretty. I can just see it just the way it would look like a little nature film, and feel that ghostly chill
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filaments of snow
drifting sideways
on the wind–
old pines
shed their ghosts
—JENNY WARD ANGYAL
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Wonderful feel to this especially when I read it out aloud.