frantic ants
still building
the unlit fire



5 Responses

  1. Dirk van Nouhuys Says:

    Great, the sense of ant movement being like flame tells us something unexpected.

  2. Jan Benson Says:

    Well done.
    Those fire ants do set flames when they land on human toes!

    Jan in Texas

  3. magyar Says:

    Nifty one John!
    __ Your… "the unlit fire," has "lit" readers' imaginations, that, is the inner value of haiku / senryu. _m

  4. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    A great sense of activity in this one.


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