all that’s fallen
through the cracks
Issue 17.2 | 5 October 2017
Lovely ku. Congratulations, Susan.
Very nice! Great line separation.
Thanks for the thumbs up, Pravat, Greg, and Mark. Glad you like this one.
The positive so well seen, Susan. Nifty!
… and that, that has fallen, can begin anew.
Thanks, Susan. This works on many levels.
And there it was in front of you the whole time…A haiku!
Many thanks for your positive comments, Mary Jo, MIchelle, and Magyar. I appreciate them all!
Love the surprise of that last line, Susan! :)
Whenever I have been on a boardwalk, USA, Australia, or Britain, I've often wondered what has 'slipped' through. Does it all physically collect 'beneath' or into an alternative reality?
down the sidewalk
an old vagrant
daisies in his mouth
Publication credits: Hobo (Tasmania, 1999); Issa's Untidy Hut (2011)
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