autumn boardwalk
all that’s fallen
through the cracks


11 Responses

  1. Mark Dailey Says:


  2. Pravat Kumar Padhy Says:

    Lovely ku. Congratulations, Susan.

  3. Greg Says:

    Very nice! Great line separation.

  4. Susan Says:

    Thanks for the thumbs up, Pravat, Greg, and Mark. Glad you like this one.

  5. magyar Says:

    The positive so well seen, Susan. Nifty!
    … and that, that has fallen, can begin anew.

  6. MaryJo Says:

    Thanks, Susan. This works on many levels.

  7. Michelle Schaefer Says:

    And there it was in front of you the whole time…A haiku!

    Nicely done

  8. Susan Says:

    Many thanks for your positive comments, Mary Jo, MIchelle, and Magyar. I appreciate them all!


  9. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Love the surprise of that last line, Susan! :)


  10. Alan Summers Says:

    Whenever I have been on a boardwalk, USA, Australia, or Britain, I've often wondered what has 'slipped' through. Does it all physically collect 'beneath' or into an alternative reality?


    down the sidewalk
    an old vagrant
    daisies in his mouth

    Alan Summers
    Publication credits: Hobo (Tasmania, 1999); Issa's Untidy Hut (2011)


  11. John Says:

    nice observation

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