I wonder what the koi would have to say about sashimi? It was wonderful seeing the koi at Yves Saint Laurent's Majorelle Garden in Morocco with all its koi.
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dark morning…
the sushi bar opens up
for the train station
Alan Summers
Publication credit: Aesthetics (Bath Spa University 2007)
Anthology credit: Haiku Friends Vol. 3 ed. Masaharu Hirata (Osaka, Japan 2009)
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Shinkansen
another bento box
gets on with me
Alan Summers
Travelogue on World Haiku Festival 2002, Part 2 (Akita International Haiku Network 2010)
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I read an impressive proportion of stuff and I found that the technique for creating to clarify that absolutely need to state was extraordinary so I am propelled and I like to return again in future..
April 6th, 2018 at 12:13 pm
removed shoes
Japanese restaurant with date
played footsies to warm feet
April 6th, 2018 at 2:19 pm
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sushi bar
making eye contact
with the koi
—ALEXANDER B. JOY
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Great poem!
I wonder what the koi would have to say about sashimi? It was wonderful seeing the koi at Yves Saint Laurent's Majorelle Garden in Morocco with all its koi.
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dark morning…
the sushi bar opens up
for the train station
Alan Summers
Publication credit: Aesthetics (Bath Spa University 2007)
Anthology credit: Haiku Friends Vol. 3 ed. Masaharu Hirata (Osaka, Japan 2009)
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.
Shinkansen
another bento box
gets on with me
Alan Summers
Travelogue on World Haiku Festival 2002, Part 2 (Akita International Haiku Network 2010)
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April 7th, 2018 at 11:48 pm
I've never eaten, sushi, but I'm sure it's delightful.
I can imaging that momentary pause when eye contact is made as the diner is about to take a mouthful of the sushi. Unnerving. Smashing verse.
April 11th, 2018 at 4:17 am
Now that might put me off my sushi, Alexander! Nice one. :)
marion
April 24th, 2018 at 11:13 am
she plays coy
on the first date—
sashimi
April 24th, 2018 at 11:29 am
This is a wicked little poem. I love it.
April 24th, 2018 at 11:31 am
Love it!
April 24th, 2018 at 12:03 pm
Oh gosh . . .this is great!
January 7th, 2022 at 5:07 am
I read an impressive proportion of stuff and I found that the technique for creating to clarify that absolutely need to state was extraordinary so I am propelled and I like to return again in future..