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1. Lynne Rees Says:
   April 16th, 2018 at 9:27 am

   I love this – sexy and funny!

2. Annette Makino Says:
   April 16th, 2018 at 11:57 am

   Thanks Lynne! My optometrist is a very enthusiastic guy.

3. Magyar Says:
   April 16th, 2018 at 1:07 pm

   __ Nifty senryu, Annette; new glasses are >sometimes< an asset_! Smiles. _m

   new glasses
   conquer yesterday's blur
   wrinkled mirror

4. Pravat Says:
   April 16th, 2018 at 6:44 pm

   An interesting ku with intertextual metaphor. The haiku reveals an imagistic fusion of romance with science.

   withered flowers
   I gather with love and care
   closing my eyes
   in the garden of memories
   I dream the greatness of living

   Pravat Kumar Padhy
   Publication Credits: Kokako 17 September, 2012

   ******* ******* *******

   We discover
   The agile ray of radiance,
   Playfully closing our eyes.
   Perhaps darkness
   Emits new streak of beam,
   In the world
   Of our divine dream.

   Pravat Kumar Padhy
   (From the book, "Songs of Love: A Celebration")
   ….. ….. …….

5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:
   April 18th, 2018 at 9:54 am

   Hahahahaha – a cheeky one, Annette!

   marion

6. Justine Says:
   April 23rd, 2018 at 10:19 am

   In the dark
   Lovely retinas
   He begins

7. Anitha Varma Says:
   April 25th, 2018 at 9:34 am

   Funny… :)

   Anitha.

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