23 thoughts on “”

  1. .
    tilting my head
    to see the rainbow
    in a spider’s web

    —CAROLINE SKANNE
    .
    .
    Great pacing of the poem showing there is not always a need to 'cut' or to go into juxtaposition mode.
    .
    .
    A glorious salute to both rainbows and our often unsung heroes, the spiders! Karen names all of her's and is very particular about not disturbing them, as they can get frightened.

    Alan

  2. Lovely work, a pleasure to read and reread.

    oil slick – from the corner of my eye a fallen rainbow

  3. Beautiful images! I read it time and again. It is so tender and the crafting is poetically so divine.

    spider web–
    my thought caught
    in between

    Pravat Kumar Padhy

    Publication Credit: Under the Basho, Inaugural Issue, Vol.1.1 Autumn 2013 (Ed. Don Baird)

    *****

    rainbow —
    kids count
    in chorus

    Pravat Kumar Padhy
    Publication Credit: A Hundred Gourds, 3:2 March 2014

Respond here